Exoplanet (Liquid/Dancefloor Rave Piano tune) what do you think ?

[BattleteK]

Hello,

So, made this tune after some learning some new stuff. What's your view on this tune guys? It's on private so the preview player does not work here: bit.ly/1Rl8DC7

 

[WhoSayReload?]

Don't be afraid to post publicly dude, we're kind round ere!

This is one of the better sounding tunes I've heard on here today, very catchy summery kind of vibe.

Work on your drums as they sound a bit plastic at the moment, especially the snare. Do something interesting with percussion, i.e fills, breaks, hats etc. Work on your drop, create a more apparent build up and drop, longer riser and perhaps leave the sub til it drops.

Keep at it

 

[BattleteK]

Don't be afraid to post publicly dude, we're kind round ere!

This is one of the better sounding tunes I've heard on here today, very catchy summery kind of vibe.

Work on your drums as they sound a bit plastic at the moment, especially the snare. Do something interesting with percussion, i.e fills, breaks, hats etc. Work on your drop, create a more apparent build up and drop, longer riser and perhaps leave the sub til it drops.

Keep at it

Haha, thanks for listening boss!

Ah okay, I thought the snare was pretty good haha, but I will look into it, maybe make it more splashy. As I hear the improvement I will probably agree with you then! Yeah, I will indeed shorten the sub its length in the intro, will not cut it out entirely, because I like the pitch up effect just before the drop. Maybe I do a generic kick/snare buildup or so, thanks anyway I can work with this! Will look into your track in the weekend!

 

[BattleteK]

Bump

 

[BattleteK]

Any comments?