exerimental tune

[glenemy]

hi this tune, i made recently, i wanted to get away from the drum an bass i make and try and express myself more, and this is the result,
(no computergame like sounds)

any feedback good or bad welcome as always

the link, and the tunes called tyrant
http://soundcloud.com/enemy

 

[Maxg]

dude - think that link's duff? Just takes me to my own uploaded tracks...

 

[glenemy]

the working link is now up

 

[Busdriver]

Hi,

I think i would try to EQ a bit between your lead and your drums, the lead is clearly overflowing the beat. After that, your idea is not bad but in my opinion you should try to add some other sounds to increase the interest.

Keep on going!

Edit: the all track seems a little bit tight sounded, i'll try to widen it (don't ask me how, i'm still searching).

 

[msmith222]

i don't want to be the bad guy here, but i think the synths still sound very 8-bit computer game, like an old atari.

 

[Neural Tech]

I like the SD work... but that lead got on my nerves in short time.

Overall levels/etc work, but I'm sorry to say this one doesn't do anything for me.

 

[glenemy]

thanks for all the comments, i take on board what you say and agree the track needs a fair bit of work, personally i felt the drums where weak and need some work also