exerimental tune

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by glenemy, Aug 23, 2009.

  1. glenemy

    glenemy Enemy is here

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    hi this tune, i made recently, i wanted to get away from the drum an bass i make and try and express myself more, and this is the result,
    (no computergame like sounds)

    any feedback good or bad welcome as always

    the link, and the tunes called tyrant
    http://soundcloud.com/enemy
     
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  2. Maxg

    Maxg The Core

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    dude - think that link's duff? Just takes me to my own uploaded tracks...
     
  3. glenemy

    glenemy Enemy is here

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    the working link is now up
     
  4. Busdriver

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    Hi,

    I think i would try to EQ a bit between your lead and your drums, the lead is clearly overflowing the beat. After that, your idea is not bad but in my opinion you should try to add some other sounds to increase the interest.

    Keep on going!

    Edit: the all track seems a little bit tight sounded, i'll try to widen it (don't ask me how, i'm still searching).
     
  5. msmith222

    msmith222 redbeard

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    i don't want to be the bad guy here, but i think the synths still sound very 8-bit computer game, like an old atari.
     
  6. Protoplasym

    Protoplasym Nuskool

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    I like the SD work... but that lead got on my nerves in short time.

    Overall levels/etc work, but I'm sorry to say this one doesn't do anything for me.
     
  7. glenemy

    glenemy Enemy is here

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    thanks for all the comments, i take on board what you say and agree the track needs a fair bit of work, personally i felt the drums where weak and need some work also