Evox - Baloon Time

[Cold]

http://soundcloud.com/cold-1/evox-baloon-time

Work in progress track, looking for any criticism and advice,
Thanks

 

[ShirPan]

structure is good, guess the synth is tad too loud, track gets pretty repetitive, missin more elements like fx, different melodies, variations and stuff.
but you have a good base to work from imo
cheers

 

[Cold]

Thanks, il try and change it up a bit and add some effects then