Evasion- Bomboclaat WIP- drum&bass. Feedback needed for second bassline.

[prettyherb]

Eepz, made this in a hour or two, what do you think of it?

That second bassline doesn't come through nicely . It does on the boxes i made it on (logitech speakers with sub), but when playing it just on laptop or iphone earplugs i can barely hear it... I added dimension expander to it and so on... But it's a hard one to beat!

https://soundcloud.com/evasionbe%2Fbomboclaaaaat-clip

Enjoy!

 

[prettyherb]

BUMp

 

[jimjimjim]

hey thats a nice fun tune. i like it.
basslines are good - come through ok on my speakers man.
only really got good things to say about this m8
nice one

 

[bulletstorm]

laptop speakers and Iphone earplugs aren't really good.
Logitech speakers on the other hand are pretty good speakers, I do all my work on logitech speakers.
I use a Beyer Dynamic headphone as reference but most of the time the tune is already to my liking.

 

[prettyherb]

laptop speakers and Iphone earplugs aren't really good.
Logitech speakers on the other hand are pretty good speakers, I do all my work on logitech speakers.
I use a Beyer Dynamic headphone as reference but most of the time the tune is already to my liking.

Yeah but i meant, when a track's mixdown is finished, it needs to sound good on ALL the things you play it on. In this case it only does on my speakers and not on the earplugs. I don't produce with them mate.
How do u like the tune itself?

Cheers