Error - Raw dubstep track

[DJError]

https://soundcloud.com/errordnb%2Fdubstep-track-updated

tell me what you think, intrested on peoples opinions

EDIT:
another track im working on

https://soundcloud.com/errordnb%2Fstart-of-new-dub-track

 

[paracyte]

Ez Kro
Where is sub in this one ?
You lack subbass action mate
Mid range wobbles are nice.
Drums sounds ok
Just make some sub action.
Cheers.

 

[DJError]

cheers for the quick reply mate,

i actually dont have a sub woofer working properly at the moment lol so im finding it kinda hard to get a good sub bass going in my tracks.
but yeh drums could be better but havnt paid much attention to them first

cheers!

 

[prettyherb]

I like the bass sounds mate! Didn't hear those a lot before. But for your subbass, maybe even if you can't hear it just play it at maximum -6 i think. I want this with subbass :p!!
Nice job!

 

[TarekFM]

You don't need a subwoofer to detect sub bass so you know, you can do so on headphones..they don't even have to be that gr8

 

[Shotty]

sounding ok man, nothing new but there is a serious lack of sub bass