Entry for ZOMBOY remix COMP thoughts?

[W3st]

Sup fellas, my first electro house song, its my entry for the zomboy remix comp of Here to Stay

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fw3st_official%2Fzomboy-ft-lady-chann-here-to

Feedback appreciated! would love to perfect this. and Fletch i know you hate this already.

 

[W3st]

sigh bump. i know this aint dnb but help a brotha out. i do my rounds.

 

[spyre]

Sounds a bit quiet and not my style

 

[spyre]

Whoops I had the volume turned down on soundcloud. LOL.

 

[W3st]

haha but not your style. anything else apart from preferential opinion? mixdown eq etc

 

[bartman2468]

not my style, but good nonetheless. if anything I'd say maybe punch the drums through a bit more but idk.

 

[spyre]

Yeah its the skrillex style synths that don't appeal to me, it is well produced though. All the best in the competition.

 

[W3st]

haha as I figured. thanks for critiquing despite not enjoying the genre, I'll work on said advice. cheers!

 

[Mr Fletch]

Haha, Thanks for the honorable mention in the OP! And yeah, not my thang, but I wont go into detail on that part.

You got some good bitcrushed synth work going on, but at some points they sound a little muffled in the 500-800hz areas, maybe a little too much distortion. I'd work on some surgical EQ on those sounds, cutting out a few unwanted frequencies will really help clean them up as there's a lot going on around that area of the spectrum. You can hear where it is quite clearly as the drums lose their punch in those parts of the track.