Enter the Void (Clip)- Feedback please!!

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by joka89, Oct 18, 2012.

  1. joka89

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    yo, just been workin on this beat the last couple of days and would appreciate any feedback or advice on what i can do next on it. Also anyone with some decent monitors let me know what the levels are like on the drums and the bassline please because my speakers are pretty shit lol.

    http://soundcloud.com/joka89/enter-the-void-clip
     
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    Lazy people are lazy, and everyone is lazy so here ya go.
     
  3. Psychoholic

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    As some feedback btw:
    Bass is a bit low volume wise, you can see that in the waveform as well the bass is constantly active but still the waveform looks like a dildo with ridges in it that means other sounds are overpowering the bass quite a lot.
    In general though I like where I think this is going :) keep it up and update this shit cause I'd like to hear the whole track.
     
  4. joka89

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    safe man, thanks for the feedback!.. yh ill adjust the levels on the bass abit. How do i go about stopping the other sounds overpowering the bass? and yeahh will do mate gonna get back to work on it and hopefully have some decent results in the end :)
     
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    loving the bass and pads, needs levelling out tho as someone said :)
     
  6. junglistguy2221

    junglistguy2221 Drum & Bass Producer

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    really good track so far. could do with some FX though to keep it rolling
     
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    I sure ain't no producing expert or anything but sidechaining always works for that and EQ the bass in its own spot and the kick in its own spot so they both go along with each other without fighting frequency wise.
     
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    thanks guys, appreciate the feedback! :) and thanks for the tips psychoholic..gotta get back to those youtube tutorials lol!