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Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Borf™, Feb 17, 2009.

  1. Borf™

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    DJ NUERA 5HEAD

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    I liked it mate, definately sounding on the right track.

    I think that the kick needs to be more stabby and the snare needs to be a bit harsher if that makes sense, and id probably turn down the high hat just a touch. just my opinion bro but definately feeling it!
     
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    co0ke windowlicker

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    agree with this chap, as far as the hats go, maybe a couple of subtle velocity/pitch changes>?

    mellow vibe tho (y)
     
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    Welsh Junglist AKA Faqade

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    Yeh the hat is a bit loud Brof, turn it down and add a little reverb and maybe add a splash/crash symbal at the end of each 32 beats or at the beginning. Try adding an some atmospheric sounds in the background to give it a bit more width maybe. Try beefing the kick drum up a little but make sure you eq it so it doesnt clash with the bassline. Sounding good though man, got a nice vibe to it, keep at it.
     
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  5. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    is it hip hop??
    if it is i couldnt give any feedback but ill av a lisin in a bit!
     
  6. Borf™

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    Yeh, tis Hip Hop

    Thanks for the feed guys.

    As I said, it's unfinished, so i'll keep your feed in mind when finishing it
     
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    Eurgh, I just listened to it on zshare, and it does no justice to it at all.

    Itunes ftw