I liked it mate, definately sounding on the right track.
I think that the kick needs to be more stabby and the snare needs to be a bit harsher if that makes sense, and id probably turn down the high hat just a touch. just my opinion bro but definately feeling it!
Yeh the hat is a bit loud Brof, turn it down and add a little reverb and maybe add a splash/crash symbal at the end of each 32 beats or at the beginning. Try adding an some atmospheric sounds in the background to give it a bit more width maybe. Try beefing the kick drum up a little but make sure you eq it so it doesnt clash with the bassline. Sounding good though man, got a nice vibe to it, keep at it.