Interesting track. In a good way, of course...
I like the sound of that bass, and the breakbeats work well with it.
The harmonies are a bit major for a harsh bass like that though.
You've written a lot of variation into that bass part: It does make it interesting, but it loses it's coherency as a whole - I'm reminded of a lot of squarepusher tracks where he's too busy writing and mangling to step back and look at the bigger picture.
The kind of evolving, growing, flowing, minimal structure is something I've been interested in for a while now, but I'm not sure how well it works in this track.
Nice track though. Finish it, but don't be afraid to tear out stuff root and branch...
Edit: Just looked at your SC and noticed that everything I said applies to most of your tracks. It just seems to be your style, go with it...