Ellipsis - Half Step Ideas.

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Ellipsis, Jan 23, 2012.

  1. Ellipsis

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    This is my first post here, please let me know what you think!
     
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    A shame no one replied to this, yet. It's very good. You did a good job on choosing the vocals and implementing them. I'd love to hear the finished product.
     
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    RUSSLA DNBF Monarch

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    yeh this is well nice! loving the vibe and the subtle build up of drums, good job! Just thicken up that lfo'in bass and you'll be there :)
     
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    Thanks for the feedback guys, still working on it, getting that bass right is a pain in the arse!
     
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    jsut layer it up with lots of different ones in different frequency ranges.. ive been listening real close to tunes recently and there is almost always a couple of random layers to the basslines.
     
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    Very good job man, rly liking ur style. Rockwell influence, no? :)
     
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    I've reworked the tune up top a bit, let me know what you think!
     
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    hmm. The Intro could use some more movement. Cymbals might be a little loud. The drums in general are too bright for that song in my opinion I really like the percussive chops in the breakdown. Why do you wait so long until you bring that cool bass in?

    I still like it, though.

    Cheers