Ellie Goulding - "Lights" (DnB Remix) My remix feedback plz

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by ammarg89, Nov 6, 2011.

  1. ammarg89

    ammarg89 New Member

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    Dont know if this is the right section to post this but here it is, i have some more DnB tracks on there also
     
  2. skwiffer

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    I don't know about the technical side of things, but I would have said a tune with vocals like that needs a proper drop. The tune needs more definition imo. For instance, I can't really tell if the bit at the end of the tune is a second drop or the build up to it. I think you need clearer sections; intro, drop, breakdown, 2nd drop. Maybe some punchier drums and make the bass a bit more audible. It's not normally what I'd listen to/play, but I quite like it. Those vocals just demand more...punch.
     
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    Liked it, though agree with a lot of what skwiffer said. The vocal cuts ain't bad either ;)
     
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    Thanks guys, yeah i have to work on it a bit more, will definitely work on the bass! EVerything is very helpful, trying to perfect my style.
     
  5. bansal321

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    yer agreed with skwiffer.... maybe you could cut all the music out and play the vocals "the strength i need to push me" on its own... then kick it in with a big drop.... just a suggestion