Element - Generation (my first track, can anyone feedback please)

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  1. Welsh Junglist

    Welsh Junglist AKA Faqade

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    Hi everyone, this is my first track that I produced on Reason 4. Can ya have a listen and give me some feedback on it, just want to put it out there and get some views on it see if I'm goin wrong anywhere:-/. Cheers everyone in advance!

    http://www.megaupload.com/?d=IVNF3I30

    Sorry everyone, firefox froze and i've posted this thread twice!
     
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    i like the vocal, other than that you just have to put the hours in if you want to make a good tune. basically i think everything could be better, one obvious thing is the hard panned bass synth, which would sound better mono.
     
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    how would you reckon i go about making it mono in Reason 4? cheers for your input man
     
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    cheers for ya help man, that video has helped me quite a bit with understanding the whole layering thing and helping me to progress a little more in the right direction. Is he using logic there, im quite into looking to get logic but I don't really want to go through a whole new learning process after getting so used to reason. What are you using to create tunes? cheers for ya help