im liking some of the ideas here... i think the snare needs turning up and there needs to be less drive on that bass, it sounds rather fuzzy on my end, i know its upposed to sound fuzzy, but not that fuzzy.... it could do with a break down to split the song up and keep interest.... i really like the ending, i mean really like it! maybe you should concentrate on house rather then electro? just my opinion but great effort on this 1!