Dubstep attempt

[conclude]

Bit sad and "dark" dubstep attempt. Thought I'd ask for some criticism before i continue with it, so I can add up on the right road.

http://soundcloud.com/conclude/dubstepattempt

 

[4nt1k1ll3r]

Bit sad and "dark" dubstep attempt. Thought I'd ask for some criticism before i continue with it, so I can add up on the right road.

http://soundcloud.com/conclude/dubstepattempt

nice idea & beats, but other sound not so are pleasant. and what do you want to do in 1:00+? it is "wobbling" or "distort bass"?

sorry for grammar...

 

[conclude]

Thx for the reply.

Dunno really, guess the idea was to make a rough wobble with a "down" beat. And kinda explore it a bit, outside the standards.

I also guess the bass on the second verse drop is kinda messy, innit? Hard to judge your own shit sometimes.

 

[conclude]

Bomp. Should I change the "wobble"? I kind of want distortion, but I would agree on it being fucked up. Any more? Feel free to bash.