Drum & Bass Dub Phizix type track I'm working on, FEEDBACK WANTED PLEASE :)

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  1. Shock/Tactics

    Shock/Tactics Get the fuck up

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    Hey guys, new track im working on, kind of in the style of Dub Phizix who I'm loving at the moment.



    Please leave some feedback, not mastered or mixed down properly yet.

    Cheers!
    Tom
     
  2. Shock/Tactics

    Shock/Tactics Get the fuck up

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    nice man, u got some wicked percussion going on. nice variation throughout

    could do with a few more bass edits or variations imo
     
  4. danwell

    danwell BAAAAAAAAAAAAABE WAIT

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    drums were nice IMO wasnt too keen on the atmospheric type sound in the intro.. also yeah needs to switch up a bit i think
     
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    pretty well done mate, bass is nice. doesnt bring anything new to the table though, you got some good production you should focus on making your own sound mate
     
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    Yeah dude thats cool! Nice percussion and I like the bass sounds to. :)
     
  7. ArticalDon

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    Good tune mate, tbh it all sounds like one big intro, Bigger build up before the drop and Maybe abit more variation
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    this is what i think

    your production is good, but this track isnt anything that hasnt been done before
     
  9. Taavi Kukk

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    fuck helllll, like it much
     
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    very nice mate feeing it, mixdown sounds tight, drums sound great
     
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    elmaruk slannndaaaaaaar

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    Sounds good mate.

    I think if you wanted to step it up though then it could really do with some atmospheres. crazy bass modulations on the fills and and some faster ryhtms dropping it.

    don't aim for a dub phizix tune. aim for your own mate.
     
  13. Shock/Tactics

    Shock/Tactics Get the fuck up

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    Hi guys, thanks very much for the feedback, I understand that I was trying to recreate a Dub Phizix bass sound in this particular track. But I take inspiration from all my favourite producers and then try and create my own tunes with what I've learnt.
     
  14. sam the dnb man

    sam the dnb man Variation

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    Yeah thats a problem you get when you make a track under the influence of Dub Phizix.
     
  15. underspawn

    underspawn Headz Roll

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    Very good production man, i'm feelin this one. And yeah, a switch in the 2nd part would be nice :)