DT & Talon - Nu Jazz (liquid)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by davethomson09, Sep 30, 2010.

  1. davethomson09

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    really liking this, the breaks wicked but could probaby be a bit more punchy or in your face when it all kicks off if you see wht i mean.
    theres somthing when it drops that sounds as if its out of key, might just be me but thats what i heard.

    keep up the good work
    and feedback on my latest post would be appreciated!
     
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    this tracks got a lot of potential mate...a few minor elements are missing imo:

    1) the intro/build up needs more energy..i like how the strings increase in velocity which builds up the tension but u need a lil more of something like that.
    2) drop is good, bass levels are nice, but a lil bit of variation in the drums is needed..ur loop roll of is the same drum roll throughout, switch it up a lil, keep it varied
    3) at 4:25 u got some wolf howl (female vox/flute?) or something...not feeling that mate lol although im feeling the sax/trumpet and the female vox towards the end.

    but like i said..its got potential, imo if u create some more variation n more energy..u got urself a hit! :p
     
  4. davethomson09

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    Love it, you should work on making it so that people can feel the bass and bass drum.
     
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    miszt BASSFACE Royale

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    sounds good, nice work! only issue I noticed was muddyness in the midrange, allot of sounds going on that could do with slightly more careful eq and compression. agree with the other posts, a little more variation would help allot, nice track tho
     
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    Really like this man, only thing I would say is that could do with a bit more variation, maybe just another bit of mid range percussion or something after the first 16 bars, but as a whole really like the track and the structure. Nice work buddy
     
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    really feeling it dude, but i think the main snare and kick should go up in the mix tho
     
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    Like this one man.
     
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    really likin this one it has a nice vibe to it. my only critisisms are that the bass and snare cud b a bit louder, but otherwise its sounds wicked! well done
     
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    Cheers guys.......great feedback as usual. Im on those changes!!
     
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    The name got me interested instantly!

    ---------- Post added at 21:52 ---------- Previous post was at 21:51 ----------

    But i cant listen to it anymore! Good work on the signing tho! :applause:
     
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    haha cheers bro. yeh unfortunately i had to take it down until nearer the release date.
     
  15. Protoplasym

    Protoplasym Nuskool

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    looks like Soundcloud is farting and won't let me have access to the file

    : ((