[Drum n Bass] Artefakt - Dark Templar Zone

[artefakt]

ok , so i want show u all what i do on fl studio and i think its almost finish , just post comment what u think , what must be change or if this track no needs that becouse is crap - simple , two way to say , good or crap , be truly : D pls without stupid jokes : D

https://soundcloud.com/artefakt%2Fartefakt-dark-templar-zone

 

[artefakt]

ok , so i want show u all what i do on fl studio and i think its almost finish , just post comment what u think , what must be change or if this track no needs that becouse is crap - simple , two way to say , good or crap , be truly : D pls without stupid jokes : D

https://soundcloud.com/artefakt%2Fartefakt-dark-templar-zone

noone ? someone ?

 

[ASTIMAHS]

Your drums are very thin. You need drums that have more impact. Start there perhaps. Hope this helps! Peace-