[Drum & Bass] - Very First

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by tokozedg, May 22, 2013.

  1. tokozedg

    tokozedg New Member

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    Greetings, very first DNB track, would be pleased for feedback. :)))

     
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    You seem to be getting the hang of it, can I make a few suggestions? people will probably say Im cheesy in my love for vocal samples, but how about some acapella in there too?
     
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    Sure, thanks Cowthief, I thought about acapella too. Good hip-hop is always good :))
    Maybe I will search good one for this track.
     
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    not bad for a first time! make ur drums more punchy :)
     
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    Thanks mate, will work on it. :))
     
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    i think besides that your drums are a bit quiet and weak, its really good.
    like 10x better than my first DNB tracks. :D
    youre on the right way!
     
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    Thanks SuBKA,
    Credits goes to my friend, actually it's him at the cover photo of song. He gives really good advices, that's what he said also, we need better drums. : ))