I think now would be a good time to starting learning the structure of a song. You got different parts but they just appear and change with no transition. Your mixing is getting better. The mix sounds real good in head phones but not so great on speakers. I sure you know that last part.
Thank you iv, and donveeeee for your comments. Ill start working on my transitions from part to part in my songs and my mix on speekers will get better once I get my monitors. I'm hoping by march I should have some. What parts stand out the most on speakers? If you don't mind me asking.
It's the drums really. In a way you have a good mix. But not a good drum and bass mix. Make sense.
You can now hear the drums coming through on your mixes but they do not have the life and character they should have. Did you ever get my last post on your song about hooking you up with better drum sample? If not pm me we will work it out.