[drum&bass] Makara's Battle Hymn

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by MikeHoog, Jun 4, 2013.

  1. MikeHoog

    MikeHoog New Member

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    My latest dnb track. It's inspired by a puppet-series back in the 80's and used some samples from it.

    Though it is dnb, I have a kinda of my own sound :D



    Hope you enjoy it, let me know what you think :)

    Cheerz,

    Mike
     
  2. kdk

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    It's a really interesting concept for a song. I like the drums and how they sit in your mix. I did feel like the song was missing a whole voice, like a lead or something. Maybe you could add something that makes the song sound more militaristic. The vocals were interesting, though maybe you could EQ them differently to be clearer. The breakdown starting at 2:45 was good. I feel like the drop at 3:28 could hit harder. The ending was very smooth; I liked it.
     
  3. stigma

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    What KDK said, but I'd like to add: you could give the drums that Konichiesque-in-yo-face-punch, and it would be Awesome) Otherwise it's nice, I like the intro and 3:28 parts:)
    Good luck with this one,man!
     
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    I really like the track. A lot of good sounds in it. The atmosphere of the whole track is awesome. Just a minor comment: in the part 1:28-1:59 you may EQ the drums differently (i.e highpass) so that when it comes back the drop at 2:00, the drums hit harder. Anyway, I enjoyed the tune and I think you've done a very solid work, congratulations!!