[Drum & Bass] JM - THLSW (Mr Cardboard Remix)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Shikijo, Apr 25, 2014.

  1. Shikijo

    Shikijo New Member

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    Hi everyone !

    I make my first DnB remix !
    A remix of the House track called THLSW from JM, a man from my crew and part of the records label Carton-Pate Records.

    It's a DnB/Tribal remix, i try to stay with the same atmosphere of the original track, but with big bassline and DnB style :).

    I hope you like it guys, and it's free !

     
  2. Solace

    Solace Active Member

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    not bad! although add something in the intro... 8bars of a break is to much
    the bass sounds alright
    variate a bit more, bass stays the same, drums also...
    and i don't know why, but i needs something, i don't know what, but it needs something... like the french say: un peux de je ne sais quoi
     
  3. Shikijo

    Shikijo New Member

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    Thanks for your answer Crizis !

    Yes the first break is really short, i produce the track for DJ set i think.
    The bass is good, but, the mix is not really good, I have not been able to separate the thre bassline correctly....
    The bassline not stay the same, i think. Drum allright. I construct the track with a House structure i think, because it's a remix.
    Thanks you so much for your feedback ! I will work hard for the second track.
    Do no hesitate to listen the Birthday Bash ! Free Compilation 2013 - 2014, maybe there is one or two tracks will we like it.

    Thank again.