i do think there is room for improvement on the technical side of things though... the structure of the track (while excellent).. can be a little repetitive, with no new elements being added in the latter half of the tune. Also i think the drums sound a little bit mechanical and not quite human...
It might just be the low quality clip... but the vocals sound a bit dodgy... as if they've been recorded on a low quality dynamic microphone...... really need a good condensor mic there. Also, might just be the clip again, but they sound a little flat... def need some high EQ boosting (about 5khz... but watch for sibilance)... and definately some delay and reverb... they just need to blend with the tune a bit more, they sound quite tacked on atm.
Also... some editing of the vocal phrases... at the moment it sounds like just a single recording session.. where the vocalist just freestyled many parts... coming and going as she pleased.. and then that's what's made it into the track. I def think the structure of the vocals needs to be looked at.. for example.. i think all the vocals between 4:07 and 4:26 should have been cut out completely... this would have given the listener a chance to concentrate on the actual song for a while, and also would have made the break much nicer when it came in.
But still... overall this tune is




i desperately want to remix this!