ah almost happy!! keep working on them soon they will be making you smile!!
this needs more work in my opinion, drums sound quite empty they might work with a more minimal track but the bass in this sounds like its trying to be jump up so its 2 different styles... but i really emphesize on the effects this needs alot more effects and needs to be more interesting. i feel like ive heard the whole tune after about 5 seconds of the bassline !! hope this helps man
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that pad is nice though but you jsut need a whole lot more going on, effects, samples, hits, drums build ups, different sections, percussions