[Downtempo/Chillout/Ambient] Scrapped - Soma(Deadmau5 Inspired)

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Hey Boards!


Well I finished another track in the past two days and I would love to get some feedback :rofl:
It took me a solid 11 rough hours to put it together so opinions are muuuuuuch apprecaited :)


The only thing I stole of the mau5 was the midi information for the piano. I have always loved the breakdown in the Soma track and felt the need to add in my own twist.

Everything else you hear is done by me.
https://soundcloud.com/scrapped%2Fsoma-downtempo


Anything I should work on? :pat:
 

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It is pretty. Well put together. But the chord progression never changes. Or you never change that last note to "un-complete" the chord progression giving the listener wanting for more. Other than that it is very good.
 
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It is pretty. Well put together. But the chord progression never changes. Or you never change that last note to "un-complete" the chord progression giving the listener wanting for more. Other than that it is very good.
Thanks Man.. I know what you mean. Considering the breakdown of Soma and the chord progression was really all I got from the song I didn't take it anywhere else hehe. I tried to stay true to the section without taking it too far.
There was one piano layer that I changed a lot when it came to the breakdown and 2nd section. It was a lot of effect driven changes and reversed sounds. I guess it wasn't enough :(


Where would you take it?
 
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