Don't have a title yet.

[BullDub]

Please some feedback i'm a starter producing theres a lot do do.
Example there are no subs (i only have headphones..)
i do have a title now.. doesnt have a meaning now until my voice is recorded
https://soundcloud.com/bull-dub/meppers-1

Please give me some tips on what i could do better thanks a lot.
I don't want the all round used jump up sounds as i like originality..

Thanks in advance Anthony.

 

[Dark Lizardro]

First of all: name your track. Names give personality, and a clue to the listener on what he/she/it should expect.

 

[BullDub]

gave it a name well i know i shud give names but its not anywhere near finished need some hint on other stuff thanks anyway

 

[Dark Lizardro]

gave it a name well i know i shud give names but its not anywhere near finished need some hint on other stuff thanks anyway

Later today I'll give it a listen and then give you my impressions.

 

[Manu Forti]

not there... ill keep eyes peeled for when you ru up

 

[BullDub]

re uploaded did a whole load of work on it

 

[Dark Lizardro]

Ok, I promised the feedback yesterday, but I was able to listen to it just today, I'm sorry!

So, here it goes: The drums are ok so far, but the snare (although punchy) is lacking some high end, IMO. Also, the bass is too loud. I think you'll need to take care of it when you add the sub. don't forget to keep everything in place, regarding the frequency spectrum.

Some variation on drums are also very welcome.