Drum & Bass Doctor P - Neon (The Rotherman Remix) - Feedback appreciated

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by The Rotherman, Sep 22, 2012.

  1. The Rotherman

    The Rotherman New Member

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    So the Neon competition was a while ago, and I did a remix for it but wasn't entirely happy. So I spent another two months perfecting it and here it is!


    If you could comment on anything you like/dislike I would really appreciate it.
     
  2. pattycake

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    Not really feeling it but there's good production/arrangement, I think choice of sounds brings the track down. Vocals are nice but not great.
     
  3. lasiien

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    Good production here, nice job. Not sure about the first drop, almost feels to me like you start the main part a bit early with the bass coming in ? (perhaps that's intended, though the drop at 3.21 sounds better to me). Really like the part at 1.30 btw, nice when everything stops just for a sec :)
     
  4. The Rotherman

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    Thanks for the feedback, I got a bit stressed over four months of working on it! :p
     
  5. The Rotherman

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    Yes it's intended but I see what you mean on the 3:21 drop. On that one I wanted to change the modulation of the drop synth but couldn't get the effect without stopping everything