dnb track, work in progress, need some feedback please

[Hansen Raigo]

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fdjzbo%2Fz-b-o-hypnotyzer-unfinished

 

[dieiscast]

i kinda like the first part which starts at 0:12. It's a bit strange but it has a good flow. You definitly need some variations and probably a intro. it is pretty predictable what comes next. the subbass is a bit too "hollow" IMO, it could be a bit darker...

 

[Hansen Raigo]

thanks for helpful reply, i thought myself as well, that subs need some extra attention