Dnb - No one knows(WIP)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by risakczex, Feb 19, 2013.

  1. risakczex

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    Hi guys :) today i just released WIP version of my new liquid dnb :)
    give me some feedback please :p
    here it is :

    comment , rate it
    thanks LyRyck :))
     
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    Loving the melody man, big fan of the piano part - nice track :)
     
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    very nice track mate, definitely like it :)
     
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    Thanks guys :)) any tips how to improve this track? :p
    i'd like to hear i have something wrong in this :3 that i can improve :)

    thanks LyRyck :p
     
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    It certainly is a really good WIP; I agree with everyone about the melody. In fact, the melody is so strong, it could easily be broken up, shortened, etc. to make for variation across an entire song. It might be interesting to take phrases from the melody and invert them, switch them around, etc. The song would write itself from that point. :)
     
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    thanks for your nice words ! :)
    yes!! this is pretty reply thanks for tips! i would like to invert them and make small loop of melody make many variations, but it need more work with it ;) i will make it ! again thanks :)