[DNB] Madknob - Bells for Future

[madknob]

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fval-wynne%2Fbells-for-future

Hi, this is my 7th track.
Loved to get any feedback about it.
Cheers!

 

[Tone1304]

they say simple is best but not in this case tbh, you need to work on melody, chord progression, punchy drums the whole lot man, sorry to rip on you but, just trying to be honest, the bell sound is nice but try using maybe less notes, or a different melody, if you do less notes stick on a delay, could help it alot, also use more variation and little 1 off bits, too keep the listener interested because its too repetetive how long have you been producing, not that long im guessing, i was pretty much the same

 

[madknob]

they say simple is best but not in this case tbh, you need to work on melody, chord progression, punchy drums the whole lot man, sorry to rip on you but, just trying to be honest, the bell sound is nice but try using maybe less notes, or a different melody, if you do less notes stick on a delay, could help it alot, also use more variation and little 1 off bits, too keep the listener interested because its too repetetive how long have you been producing, not that long im guessing, i was pretty much the same

Thanks man, 2 Months

 

[Tone1304]

2 months in i couldn't even finish a song