Hi again,
Overall, this track is more complete than the other one. One issue to address, is that when sequencing the elements, there are noticable gaps that break the flow
( listen at
0:04 triggered late
0:23 triggered early
0:30 triggered late )
I am not sure how you are arranging your tracks ( be it FL/Reason/hardware etc ), but they should all have a 'snap-to' option to get rid of this. The bass line is better on this one as well. Keep up the good work!