Overall, this track is more complete than the other one. One issue to address, is that when sequencing the elements, there are noticable gaps that break the flow
( listen at
0:04 triggered late
0:23 triggered early
0:30 triggered late )
I am not sure how you are arranging your tracks ( be it FL/Reason/hardware etc ), but they should all have a 'snap-to' option to get rid of this. The bass line is better on this one as well. Keep up the good work!
Thanks for the reply it helps alot. I'm using fruity loops btw. I did notice that some of the sequencing was out but i couldn't be bothered to fix it seeing as i've already started my next song. Btw what is snap-to? I leave it at 1/2 beat
In the upper right hand corner of the FL display there is a selection box with the name "Snap". Change it from 1/2 to "Cell" or "Line" depending on what you are doing. If you keep it on 1/2, you can get those mis-spaced elements. I had the same problem when I was starting....