Dj jammin - 3rd d&b try, someone actually give feedback this time 8-)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Dj Jammin, Oct 23, 2006.

  1. Dj Jammin

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    http://fool.tracerhosting.com/3rdtry.mp3

    This is my 3rd attempt at a drum n bass song, it's not finished yet so i'd like advice on how to go. I've gone with quite a simple bassline but it seems to work.
     
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    Affliction thought size didnt matter

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    my feedback is.... keep practicing.

    You're being quite brave by sharing your earliest tracks, generally people keep their early work to themselves until they've reached a good level. Anyway nobody can expect their first, second, or even third tracks to be any good, it might take 100 tracks before people start to take notice, so don't give up :)
     
  3. D BREAKNECK

    D BREAKNECK 7 years on top

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    I'm liking the arabian / electro hum & you've got some nice sounds in there...

    Keep practising, but it's promising!
     
  4. Dj Jammin

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    Finally :p thanks for the feedback. I know for a fact i suck but everyone does when they start. Also i need to get my hands on a keyboard i can hook up to my pc because it's hard getting a good bassline in fruity loops without one.
     
  5. D BREAKNECK

    D BREAKNECK 7 years on top

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    Nah...

    It doesn't suck...I'd suggest just listen to the sounds you're making and see where they lead you and don't rush to try and follow the formula tune or make a finished track...

    It's all work in progress innit.

    I don't think u need equipment if you play wid what u got...