dj-dusty new track

[dj-dusty]

hey guys i need some decent advice on my new track ive been working on, im pretty pleased with it so far but it needs improving.
http://www.dnbshare.com/download/Govermentistheproblem.mp3.html

cheers guys

 

[Fratanize]

Think you will need to keep it varied. On the bassline you have a whomp then the stuttered typr synth tune. I think you could vary the amount of whomps every 4 bars. so on the 4th you get a whomp whomp whomp.
Good tune tho mate. Dunno about the government sample. Its not the catchiest of samples and your tune is catchy. Doesnt really do your tune justice.
Keep at tho fella. Would be iterested to hear the final outcome.
peace