Dj-Dusty new jump up tune

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by dj-dusty, Apr 4, 2009.

  1. dj-dusty

    dj-dusty Member

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    Hi guys, been working on this new tune for a couple of days and am pretty pleased with it as i am not very good at the production side of things.I know there is somthing missing, but just dont know what.

    Would be good to get some feedback off you guys.

    Hope you enjoy

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/581804895017e815/
     
  2. dj-dusty

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    tis good mate!

    good ideas

    whats missing is that ur drums are quite weak. layer the kicks and snares. Beef it all up etc

    its all trial and error my friend
     
  4. krease

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    listened.

    is ok but need bigger drums as suggested, switch the bass up a bit aswell to keep the listener interested.
     
  5. thin king

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    not bad at all - the drums do need a bit more not too much though and I reckon it may just be lacking a bit in the low mid range - whack a spectral analyser on your master and have a look for gaps.
     
  6. subprime

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    Yeah man, if that's the sound you like, the structure was sweet. I didn't think the drums were soo bad, but the bass was lacking a punch and a growl and a kick in the guts that you need for that sound imho.
     
  7. resonance

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    good tune mate i like the style you have. Just do what they say above mate and it will be sweet
     
  8. Nutek

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    just shadowing what everyone else has said bro.. keep at it (y)