Hi nice tune. The only thing I could think of to improve it would be to add a snare layer which is a bit more metallic sounding, just to give it a little more colour but yeah other than that the tune seems great. I like that from what I heard the 2nd drop is different too ^.^ Good work
Not a huge fan, the drums hit too hard I reckon but that's just my personal opinion. I think you can boost you sub frequencies a little, it sounds a little weak. I like the drum pattern on the second drop, and the bass overall is cool. I'd give it a bit more variation though.