Quite a few crackles and pops when the vocal sample was playing.
Needs a bit of filling out. A little empty and a little clean sounding (drums-wise)
The arrangement that you've got so far is good anyway.
Like the vibe to it! At times the kick distorts, i find this annoying. Make sure the track isn't clipping. Like someone else said the vocal is pretty crackly and poppy, i guess the sample is pretty low quality but u could try and clean it up as much as possible. The amen u got there works well, but it could be louder in the mix and pulled from the background imo. Nice ideas, good luck!