detonate - dream of two dj's (sample)

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  1. detonate-dj

    detonate-dj sexdrugs&rockinthedole

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    after the comments on the last clip i posted, i re-thought about carrying it on, i got my head stuck into a eq & mastering guide and it helped alot, so did alot of tips of this forum, its a different track to last time it wont be perfect obviously but i think its alot better. let me know what you's think....cheers


    detonate - dream of two dj_s.mp3 - 2.54MB

    new link...ive changed the melody of the bassline, and its full the track now
    detonate - dream of two dj_s.mp3 - 2.57MB


    also could a mod take sample of the thread title plz??
     
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    detonate-dj sexdrugs&rockinthedole

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    new link up....full track
     
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    D-Tektiv Active Member

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    Nice one bro. Where'd you get the vocals?
     
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    detonate-dj sexdrugs&rockinthedole

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    it was in a pack off 'pella's i found through google. the original songs called afrika bambaata - got to get up,
    and cheers
     
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    D-Tektiv Active Member

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    Well nice one bro, it fit in perfect, especially when ya chilled the track to the breakdown with no beat and the rap seemed to turn softer as well...respect bro. pz
     
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    detonate-dj sexdrugs&rockinthedole

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    i'm glad you like it..it's only the first full track ive done,
    nice 1
     
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    detonate-dj sexdrugs&rockinthedole

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    up, any more people up for listening? only my first full track and wanna know what im doing right/wong...cheers
     
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    Nutek movement junglist

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    sounding good for your first full track bro, keep at it ;)
     
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    detonate-dj sexdrugs&rockinthedole

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    cheers nutek
     
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    The vocal sample was a pretty good choice. Overall the track sounded like it was a bit empty, like the bass could have been a bit fuller, covered a bit more of the freq spectrum, add a few other bits in. The drums could be varied a bit, filtered etc.
    But that's all for next time. Not bad for a first track.
     
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    detonate-dj sexdrugs&rockinthedole

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    cheers subprime, i basically followed a few tips off the eq guidelines some1 posted up the other day (not sure who) and from a book. i think im gonna go back to this and keep trying different stuff with it... thanks again
     
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    Nutek movement junglist

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    fuck the books bro, your ears are the best tool for judging whether it sounds good or not!
     
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    detonate-dj sexdrugs&rockinthedole

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    my ears are terrible ha ha especially my right 1 ive got tinitus
     
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    Nutek movement junglist

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    ouchhh, that's my worst fear..
     
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    detonate-dj sexdrugs&rockinthedole

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    was myn too lol got hit with a bat about 3 years ago... shittest thing thats ever happend to me