demo of a track called danger - dar kist

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  1. dar kist

    dar kist KYRO VIP Junglist

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    ez everyone , got a demo of my track that ima submit for TOTM, just a intro and drop into the main tune at the mo, could do with any sorta feed back,

    click here for the mp3


    oh ands it a DNB tune for a change!!

    peace
     
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  2. $marty

    $marty Dexcell Tribal Leader VIP Junglist

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    wicked things as usual dar!!
     
  3. vickvega

    vickvega Mr. Blonde VIP Junglist

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    wots this with teh download-lets see dark one
    like the deep echoed voice-intro drums a bit distorted-like the feel of em-tough
    thats it -man you had me ready for the drop-sounds like its big tame those drums bro
    cant wait to hear it-hope it beats wot i got cookin
    big respect to the dark one
     
  4. dar kist

    dar kist KYRO VIP Junglist

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    cheers for the feedback fellas, vick - what do you mean by ' sounds like its big tame those drums ??

    peace
     
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    Simm3r Gonna shmoke a bowl

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    yeh man i think thats gonna be a big tune, likin the crazy dark sounds at the start. only one thing i noticed is that your snare sounded a little bit distorted to me, maybe add some compression or something to it. but yeh keep it up man im likin your stuff
     
  6. tarranjoe

    tarranjoe Active Member VIP Junglist

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    sick man, fukin dirty, really feelin it darkist, im not sure aboput keepin the pads in when it drops, and as was said earlier, snare sounds over distorted. i also think it could do with a bit more precussion in it. but hey, i cant make tunes like you. so ignore this if u want, lol
     
  7. dar kist

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    thanks for the feedback fellas, much appreciated. ive only spend about 5 hours on it so far, so ill sort the snare out, all i did was cut and paste it to make it worth listening to as a demo, so the main tunes isnt even half done yet. thanks again for ya feedback,

    tarranjoe man i take all advice from every one, you have probally been listening to dnb for longer than i have!!
     
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    JAGZ Well-Known Member VIP Junglist

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    tune is all good not my style but i liked it, some sort of drop is needed but other than that its cool
    respect
     
  9. dar kist

    dar kist KYRO VIP Junglist

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    cheers fella , the nearly finished track will be up later on