Delta - Redemption

[Solace]

Alright, I've uploaded a little part of a track I'm working on... I feel I can't improve alot on it anymore so I thought I'd smack it on soundcloud.

So I wouild love to hear some comments, criticisms, anything!

https://soundcloud.com/deltadnb%2Fredemption

 

[subprime]

What you've got so far sounds totally pro, clean. Interested to hear the whole thing and how the track progresses.

 

[Solace]

Yea that's a bit where I'm stuck right now. I have a full track, but it doesn't progress that much...
A hat more here and a little bass switch there, but nothing enough I feel

But thanks!