Yeah I'm liking this one, very atmospheric and uplifting. A proper summer vibe to it. I think at some points the drumloops and percussion are a little too "in your face" for this style of track, maybe tone them down a little and let the listener enjoy the melodic rise of the track. Also maybe get some clarity on the vocal speech, again I felt it was kinda drowned out by the percussion of the track. Sounds like it was a good vocal, lets let the listener hear it in all it's glory!
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I'll take what you said about the drums into consideration. I was definitely a little unsure at parts concerning the volume of the breaks, so I'm glad to know that they're a little on the loud side. I eq'd the Sagan sample as best I could, but I may just want to automate the volume on the drums to help those vox stand out more. I appreciate the speedy feedback!
Yeah, the snare drums might be able to use a bit more definition. I mixed this on some crappy speakers in hope that, if they sounded good on those, they would sound good on any sound system. All of your feedback is very helpful. Thanks!