Deep Liquid - "The Truth & Other Lies"

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by junglistguy2221, Sep 7, 2013.

  1. junglistguy2221

    junglistguy2221 Drum & Bass Producer

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    its a bit rough but i need some feedback to progress it, thanks.
     
  2. LVB

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    kick is waay too loud compared to the rest of the mix, raise the sub, cool track
     
  3. Mania

    Mania i fukin wot m8

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    LVB's spot on.
    Your chords are nice but dont last long, so i'd say change up a few melodies a bit more, and chuck on the layers.
    Good work so far.
     
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    junglistguy2221 Drum & Bass Producer

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    cheers for the feedback. uploaded a new version, lowered the kick and changed some of the other levels. added some more layers and changes. let me know if it sounds better pls
     
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    I listened to the new one. I like the overall feel, love the beat. The drum sounds themselves are a bit ... not muddy, but lacking crispness. Maybe they've been a touch over processed? As far as this version goes, there seems to be enough layers to keep the song interesting.