(Deep Liquid female vocals) Electricity (Lavance Remix)

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  1. LVB

    LVB Active Member

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    Sup guys! been a while since we posted anything

    pretty bugged about the quality of the vocals, the stems were sausaged to death!

    hope you enjoy though! :)



    Feedback is greatly appreciated!
     
  2. Kee & Flash

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    Nice atmosphere, i really like it! Maybe the snare needs a tiny bit more body but well done!
     
  3. LVB

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    Thanks man! :)
     
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    Only on laptop, but like it mate.. Nice flow :)
     
  5. FrustrateUK

    FrustrateUK Mad Scientist

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    Really nice chaps the Lavance stuff is good - and you guys are really young right??

    Suggestions for this are - hi-pass the bass/synth line as that synthy sound is nice but too quiet - highpass it and saturate it / make it louder and sidechain it to the kick.. Vocals are too far back in the mix imo so what i`d suggest is again make them louder but also brighten up the top end on the vocal with some eq and/or remove some of the lower frequencies ( around 300 ish )..
     
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  6. LVB

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    Cheers Skuff!

    and thank you for the feedback Frustrate! Will surely try this out now :), and yes, we are 14 and 16 years old, cheers!
     
  7. Andej

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    Overall good mix, but you should make the section at the begginning louder, and you could do that with the vocals too, and also compress them a little, maybe.
     
  8. LVB

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    Thanks for the feedback Andej, I'll see what I can do, but I think the vocals are a little too compressed already haha, cheers though!
     
  9. Menosance

    Menosance aka OSOI

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    Excellent intro but do bring it up a bit and also the vocals along the track. Beef up the snare by adding another layer or EQing/Compressing but other than that this track is pretty much excellent :)
     
  10. LVB

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    Cheers for the feedback Menosance! :)
     
  11. W3st

    W3st Unsigned DnB Producer

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    oooh nice track. liking the cymbals. I think the snare is fine, I dont like the kick tho... too much compared to the snare. i'd go for a different sample with less click imo. Real nice track though! cheers.
     
  12. LVB

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    Thanks w3st! We tried to go all Hybrid Minds on that kick haha, cheers for the feedback!
     
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    RUSSLA DNBF Monarch

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    Mate this is huge! Loving all the little breaks you've done! quality! Think the kick is a bit loud compared to the snare tho, overal mix needs a bit of work but very tidy!!

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    also the drums from 2.56 could be filtered in more subtly as they kinda come outta no where but thats personal taste of course :)
     
  14. LVB

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    Cheers Russla! Really appreciate the feedback :)
     
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    wow.....imagine what you'll be making ten years from now.....Really impressed lads
     
  16. LVB

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    Thanks a lot Dubsta! Appreciate the kind words :)
     
  17. Dom!Reavers!

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    I agree the snare could use some more umph, it needs to be up with the kick, which is sick btw, the whole tune has a hybrid minds kind've feel to it and a nice big snare will help alot with the fullness of the track I think, everything else is sick though, you guys have got a lot of potential :)
     
  18. LVB

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    Thanks for the kind words Reavers! :)
     
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    everything mixing well man, nice song structure... i reacon just some panned out very light hat patterns in the intro liven it up a bit... cos i was pretty bored until the drop, can divert people from the track
     
  20. LVB

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    Thanks a lot for the feedback Jhepz, will defo keep that in mind :)