I really like to vocals, has some real soul to it. But in my opinion the rest isnt working. The fast looping before the drop is kinda I don't know. It doesnt fit with this vocal. I do like the kick snare beat going on later on but the harsh noises again dont work in this track in my opinion.
thanks for the input people. i try to keep my own unique style in each track so i will work with the "harsh" noises, but i don't feel comfortable removing them as this is the basis for that part of the track. i always appreciate everyone's critique and take things on board, but with this one i think i may just have to play around with it rather than totally change it. the harshness of the noise was what i wanted and i was going for a particular vibe - i will work on blending it better
Yes Christov. I like it, but think it needs a bit more 'oomph' underneath. What this is tho depends on which direction you want to take the tune - a bouncy Icicle type vibe or a mellower Alex Perez type ting. Would benefit most from a heavy rolling bassline IMO. Yahgetsmefam. I like the womps tho.
nice one mate, yeah definitely needs something else, the heavy rolling bassline sounds like a good layer to add next. i want it to be "on the cusp" of bouncy Icicle and "veering towards" mellow Alex Perez with a "run out of things to put into quotations" finish.... ya get me?
Definietly the best thing is vocals, is always good to have some special-made samples, huh? You`re trying deep drum and bass (i mean liquid-like stuff)? There`ssome good example: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tESOcHfqyIo . Notice the sub-bass, which here`s IMO important in those styles.
wouldnt really describe this tune as deep and the noise on the start of each loop is a lil irritating not bad tho like the snare and can see it getting better.. very nice vocals what are they from? nice find