deep bass (wip)

[EvezDroppin]

http://www.dnbshare.com/download/deep.mp3.html

rights herees a tune iv been working on today, iv only got a couple of bars of bassline at the minute and maybe the intro needs touchin up but id like to know what u think about it.
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I think it sounds pretty dark man, especially that intro with the little kid laughing! Its hard to say too much about it yet as its such a young tune (short), but i think the bass could do with a bit off top end rasp maybe?