Multi Genre dedicated to stevie/vengeance - feedback needed!

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by donveeeee, Jan 2, 2013.

  1. donveeeee

    donveeeee New Member

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    Hi guys, I have posted my jungle tune on this forum before, but being a noob, I posted it in the wrong bit :applause: lol!

    But having just started out, I am currently messing with masses of loops to create a generic sound for creating a basic rhythm to my tunes! I am only a beginner and would appreciate feedback (good or bad) :)



     
  2. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    It sucks. Nothing about this is good. Drop the loops except for the drums. Chop em up and write your own. Get a good rhythm and put some bass on top of it. Then repost.
     
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    best fucking thread

    sig worthy
     
  4. donveeeee

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    appreciated! will keep in mind for future projects :)
     
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    :bruce: didn't he do well. Not entirely sure what you were aiming for but start again and try something different.
     
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    Neomind Too many skulls!">:O

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  7. donveeeee

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    hmm, keeping in mind this is my first attempt at any kind of production, i am completely aware of the long road ahead and the things i need to learn! guess you can't hit the nail on the head first time ayee :)
     
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    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    Sorry I came off as a dick. I could of said what I needed to say better.
    Drop the loops. Start writing you own rhythms and basses. Keep in touch and we will help you out.
     
  9. donveeeee

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    i'll be sure to do my own thing from now on!

    thanks for the feedback guys :)