Dedbult - Hazchem, A Work In Progress

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  1. Forau

    Forau CONCUSSION RECS

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    I deleted the old thread, i accidentally uploaded an old version.


    Anyhoo, below is a track ive been working on on and off for a while.
    I used one or 2 samples (including the voice), the majority i made from scratch.



    Wanted aggressive bass, but didnt want to slip into the realms of neurofunk just yet.

    Still needs a lot of work, but the idea i had in my head is down.

    Any criticisms are welcome =P.
     
  2. luciduk

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    hey man, i think the drums needs some moar low end in them and some more punch, they sound a bit flat in my headphones!! they could all do with standing out a bit more in the mix. its a cool tune though
     
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    Yeah i see where your coming from, the drums have been annoying me for a while, might even change them completely :/
     
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    Not bad man:) Agree about the drums tho
     
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    Forau CONCUSSION RECS

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    Yeah, i think thats the plan of action. Whenever i put together a drum loop, i get up, play it, and try to skank/dance to it, and it just doesnt really work with this beat.
     
  6. richie_stix

    richie_stix gomby plz

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    drum pattern wise is cool, but that snare definately needs to pul through more... i see it sort of having a 'cheung' sorta metalic sound?

    not inna this kind a tune so dont really know what to offer you creativly?
     
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    PandaMindset Does not eat bamboo.

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    Dope, however until 0:20 it dosen't sound like there is anything more than different kinds of noises.
     
  8. richie_stix

    richie_stix gomby plz

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    i quite liked that ;)
     
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    As i say, its a major work in progress, i am planning on lengthening the intro, and varying it up more. Any recomendations as to how i could do so?