decay

[co0ke]

this is something slightly different from my usual output.
all feedback is very welcome and appreciated
cheers

http://soundcloud.com/co0ke/decay2

 

[subprime]

Really like where you're headed. Not quite sure if you pulled it off fully.

I think it was the drums bugging me. They start very light (which is fine) but for me they could have gotten a bit more weighty at some point. Not over the top or anything.
I do get that it's not supposed to be jump up 101 but that's just my opinion.

But I do like it, I'll listen a few more times for sure.

 

[Mr Fletch]

I have to agree with Subprime on this. I really like tthe way this track is headed. It has a nice mellow intro which I like, some nice pad work in there too. But once the bass drops I think you could fatten the drums a little.

Keep at it tho, this one's got potential.

 

[*State]

same as what the others have said, i would personally layer a suitable break over the top.... thats just me tho. i think its a pretty good track with a bagfull of potential. what about some backround synth or pad sorta thing maybe?

 

[Fratanize]

same as others dude. good work tho

 

[co0ke]

thanks for listening chaps, iv taken what u said into account. gotta admit i find it pretty hard workin on tracks ive bounced, but ill re-up if i find any success - nice one again!