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Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by co0ke, Jan 17, 2010.

  1. co0ke

    co0ke windowlicker

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  2. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    Really like where you're headed. Not quite sure if you pulled it off fully.

    I think it was the drums bugging me. They start very light (which is fine) but for me they could have gotten a bit more weighty at some point. Not over the top or anything.
    I do get that it's not supposed to be jump up 101 but that's just my opinion.

    But I do like it, I'll listen a few more times for sure.
     
  3. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    I have to agree with Subprime on this. I really like tthe way this track is headed. It has a nice mellow intro which I like, some nice pad work in there too. But once the bass drops I think you could fatten the drums a little.

    Keep at it tho, this one's got potential.
     
  4. *State

    *State Self confessed VW nut

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    same as what the others have said, i would personally layer a suitable break over the top.... thats just me tho. i think its a pretty good track with a bagfull of potential. what about some backround synth or pad sorta thing maybe?
     
  5. Fratanize

    Fratanize Keepin the jungle alive

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    same as others dude. good work tho
     
  6. co0ke

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    thanks for listening chaps, iv taken what u said into account. gotta admit i find it pretty hard workin on tracks ive bounced, but ill re-up if i find any success - nice one again!