Deathscreen - DUBSTEP 2nd tune :D

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by llSpaMll, Oct 13, 2009.

  1. llSpaMll

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    idk i might sound like a dink but it's got a ripping bassline and i think you should listen to it whomever you may be. criticism would be stellar too!
     
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    you got a link for it anywhere? i did this same thing about 5 minutes ago lol
     
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    Something, possibly the reverb tail on the piano, is creating a bit of a muddy drone throughout the track. Not sure if it's intentional or not, but it got a bit tiring/annoying for my ears.
    Like the bass work, not sure where you're taking the track over-all, be good to hear the full length finished piece.
     
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    this definitely. its getting in the way of everything else. shouldnt be anything that a bit of eq'in won't solve. other than that, the bass is mint, love all the variation. drums could do with similar though.
     
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    yeah was a 3 hour project but ill get on all of that!
     
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    idk i eq'd a tad more n turned the bass up and got rid of that pianoy thing you guys were talking about i think so heres an alllmost finished version

    http://www.mediafire.com/?xnqnmjzwlw4

    it's easier to judge with the mp3 i suppose cause theres not shittyness inbetween but feedback would be most welcome :D
     
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    i keep on switching things but this ones the pretty much finished copy it's got all the glitchy effects and stuff to make it wonderful. feedback would be cool it's a full 320.

    http://www.mediafire.com/?ztjzeozgkdm