I've got to say the lack of weight in the other drums pulls my attention to the kick too much, i personally think a heavier snare would really improve the overall vibes but maybe take the track away from the deep vibes your going for, but i think the overall layout is good.
Upon second hearing, sounds better although i do get a feeling you should mess around with it more (drum rolls(please not kick!), melodic stabs, fx, etc) only add a few little touches to keep interest going.