Daybreaks (WIP)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by foeddd, May 30, 2013.

  1. foeddd

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    anyone? feedback?
     
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    I quite like it man. It's pretty chilled and builds up nicely. I'm not a fan of pitched up vocals but they seem to work. Some concerns are the drop, it comes out of nowhere. Maybe make some subtle changes and breakdown the elements a little then have that reverse cymbal bring you back in. This might be me being picky but I'm not to fond of the synth that's playing the melody on the drop and in the build up to the drop. It sounds a little 'sad' it would be nice to hear it played with a sharper sounding synth if that makes sense. And maybe bring the snare out just a little....

    The track is good though, I like it just a few bits that may need altering :)